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James Knight's avatar

Thank you for such a beautiful poem. I felt it deserved a response of its own:

The years roll on beneath the sun

Through all the good and all the bad

So love the ones who share the run

And do not stay too long in sad

The dog still runs across the grass

His tail aloft and spirit glad

A lesson in the present tense

And do not stay too long in sad

For time is all we truly hold

No more is promised than is had

So treasure those who walk beside

And do not stay too long in sad

A. G. Giberson | Poet's avatar

We truly are all a little sad. It’s impossible not to be, I think. The melancholy in this is like a metronome.

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