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michelle ray's avatar

Ha! So weird what ppl keep. Hilarious story, and you stuck the ending🙌🤣

Moe Writeous's avatar

A beautiful slice of life! I’m glad you didn’t keep the shoes for yourself. It says a lot.

Mandy Franklin's avatar

Thanks so much, Moe.

Dipti  Vyas's avatar

Some grievances never leave. They sit quietly in a box for thirty-five years, waiting for the right moment to become a punchline.

What got me wasn’t the shoes. It was the strange persistence of both of you: your mother keeping them through moves, losses, and decades, and you carrying the memory just as faithfully.

The ending made me laugh out loud. A perfect act of poetic justice, wrapped in love, exasperation, and a pair of unworn LA Gears.

Mandy Franklin's avatar

Brilliantly stated. Thanks so much for reading and seeing the absurdity of it from both sides.

Lynn J. Broderick's avatar

I absolutely adore this piece, Mandy.

Mandy Franklin's avatar

That is so nice of you to say! Thank you so much for reading and letting me know! ♥️

Randee Herrin's avatar

Of all the trauma-induced survival tactics, I think your ability to take the deepest, darkest, and find the irony and laugh is perhaps the best one.

Mandy Franklin's avatar

I'm lucky to have a friend who appreciates my dark humor. You are the best, Rand. ♥️

A. G. Giberson | Poet's avatar

My jaw dropped so fast. The absolute audacity. I totally relate to the laughing hysterically while crying...the feelings needing to leave your body because they are so enormous. It is fitting that they will be cremated with her. As an aside, you always write in a way that makes me feel. Your stories draw me in and make me feel like I truly know you. They are honest and lacking ego. You just write the truth. I admire that.

Mandy Franklin's avatar

That street goes both ways. I am certain it will be like we've known each other forever when we meet in person one day.

Thanks so much for getting it. ♥️

A. G. Giberson | Poet's avatar

I think so too! Some people are just kindred. Like you've always known them. Funny how it works that way.

Jason O'Toole's avatar

They brought those back. They're like $60 now.

Mandy Franklin's avatar

I should buy her a new pair.